Stan Doherty, Eliot Kimber, and Joyce Lam: Each of you offered useful feedback. Please take a look at working draft #09:
https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dita/download.php/65770/dita-2.0-specification.pdf I incorporated as much of the suggested changes as possible; in other places, I added your feedback as draft comments and responded to them. Let me know if you have any questions, comments, or thoughts. -- Best, Kris Kristen James Eberlein Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting
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