Hi Andy, I'm not sure what I'm looking at here. Is this Audun's edit to some version of the document that's different from the one I have in DocBook? We agreed that the changes would be made to the version that I currently have, not some other version; I can't work with edits to some other document. If what's intended here is a complete rewrite of the version that I currently have, starting with the version that I currently have and merging all the changes that were made in that process, then I guess you should just merge everything on your end into a single deliverable and I'll redo the copy editing and the DocBook markup from scratch. Let me know how you'd like to proceed with this. Jon Andrew M Schoka wrote: > Audun, > > Sorry to have taken so long getting back to you on this. You have done a > really good job of enhancing the text and the graphics for this Section. > The changes I have embedded should be seen with the track changes > function of Word. Most of changes suggested came from someone in the > Freight Forwarding environment. Some of my comments are just questions > for clarification. I am hoping that you or Tim could shed some light on > those with your transport background. I am uncertain about our next > phone call but will check in at 9am Eastern US Daylight Savings time. I > believe that would be 2pm Tues for you. > > > > Regards, > > Andy Schoka