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MOX Charter comments - General Issues

  • 1.  MOX Charter comments - General Issues

    Posted 09-23-2008 03:29
    The lengthy statement "Other contributions will be accepted..." is 
    repeated verbatim in (1)(b) and (1)(c). Please eliminate one, and make 
    clear what this means (see my comments on licensing for more detail).
    
    In (1)(c) item 7 says "the Telecom Member section TC". A member section 
    is not a TC.
    
    The numbered lists are referred to as bulleted lists but by item number, 
    e.g., "bullet number 4".
    
    The deliverables do not have projected dates except for the first one. 
    Must be corrected. Your plan is not at all obvious, and its timing and 
    scope is not clear.
    
    The telecom requirements have clearly inspired this work, but the work 
    needs a broader audience for its broader purpose. Section (1)(d) needs 
    to be reconsidered in this light:
    
    (1)(d) ..."The TC will closely coordinate with other TCs, particularly 
    with those in the Telecom Member Section to ensure that related 
    specifications are consistent and can be used with each other." But the 
    TC is not affiliated with the Telecom Member Section, and there are 
    other TCs in the related work comments that should be explicitly 
    coordinated with.
    
    You say "...the co-chairs will..." but the chairing of the TC is not 
    determined until the first meeting.
    
    bill cox
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