OASIS eXtensible Access Control Markup Language (XACML) TC

There are a few problems with the Export Control Profile.

1. I checked and we never voted this version to CD. You need to create a working draft. It can be just the .doc version. 

2. The date should be a day as well as month and year. For a wd the date is what ever date you finished editing it. For CD and CS, it MUST be the date of the vote to that status.

3. The working draft version number should be 1+the last working draft version. In other words, wd, cd and cs each maintain their own independant version number sequences.

4. If there are no defined namespaces, you should change [list namespaces here] to "None".

5. The only uses of the normative reference to XACML 3.0 core that I can find are in the introduction which is clearly marked non-normative. Therefore it appears that the reference is non-normative. 

6. Isn't it the intention that this Profile work with any version of XACML? I think therefore you should list XACML 1.0, 1.0 and 2.0 as well.

I suggest you create a new working draft as soon as you can and post it. Then after popele have looked at it we can vote it to CD and PR on March 11.

Assuming you adopt this procedure, do you want the Export Control Profile to go out for public Review right away?

Hal

 

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> From: Harold Lockhart [mailto:hal.lockhart@oracle.com] 
> Sent: Thursday, February 25, 2010 15:16
> To: john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> 
> There are a few problems with the Export Control Profile.
> 
> 1. I checked and we never voted this version to CD. You need 
> to create a working draft. It can be just the .doc version. 

From http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml/201002/msg00003.html:

  John: moves to initiate the 15 day public review
  Rich: seconds
  Hal: no objections to unanimous consent: approved

--Paul

On February 11 we voted it to CD and public review.

--Paul 

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> From: Tyson, Paul H 
> Sent: Friday, February 26, 2010 08:16
> To: Harold Lockhart; john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: RE: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> 
>  
> 
> > 
Original Message-----
> > From: Harold Lockhart [mailto:hal.lockhart@oracle.com] 
> > Sent: Thursday, February 25, 2010 15:16
> > To: john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> > Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> > Subject: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> > 
> > There are a few problems with the Export Control Profile.
> > 
> > 1. I checked and we never voted this version to CD. You need 
> > to create a working draft. It can be just the .doc version. 
> 
> From http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml/201002/msg00003.html:
> 
>   John: moves to initiate the 15 day public review
>   Rich: seconds
>   Hal: no objections to unanimous consent: approved
> 
> --Paul
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I am sorry, all the comments in my email were intended to refer to the IPC Profile.

You are correct, Export Control is ready to go to public review. Do you want to proceed with it or wait until we process the IPC Profile?

Hal 

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> From: Tyson, Paul H [mailto:PTyson@bellhelicopter.textron.com]
> Sent: Friday, February 26, 2010 9:21 AM
> To: Tyson, Paul H; Harold Lockhart; john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: RE: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> 
> 
> On February 11 we voted it to CD and public review.
> 
> --Paul 
> 
> > 
Original Message-----
> > From: Tyson, Paul H 
> > Sent: Friday, February 26, 2010 08:16
> > To: Harold Lockhart; john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> > Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> > Subject: RE: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> > 
> >  
> > 
> > > 
Original Message-----
> > > From: Harold Lockhart [mailto:hal.lockhart@oracle.com] 
> > > Sent: Thursday, February 25, 2010 15:16
> > > To: john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> > > Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> > > Subject: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> > > 
> > > There are a few problems with the Export Control Profile.
> > > 
> > > 1. I checked and we never voted this version to CD. You need 
> > > to create a working draft. It can be just the .doc version. 
> > 
> > From 
> http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml/201002/msg00003.html:
> > 
> >   John: moves to initiate the 15 day public review
> >   Rich: seconds
> >   Hal: no objections to unanimous consent: approved
> > 
> > --Paul
> > 
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They can go independently. 



                                                

					
                                                    

        
                                                
				
                                                

                                                    
                                                        
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                                                Original Message-----
From: Harold Lockhart [mailto:hal.lockhart@oracle.com] 
Sent: Friday, February 26, 2010 10:28 AM
To: Tyson, Paul H; Tolbert, John W
Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments

I am sorry, all the comments in my email were intended to refer to the IPC Profile.

You are correct, Export Control is ready to go to public review. Do you want to proceed with it or wait until we process the IPC Profile?

Hal 

> 
Original Message-----
> From: Tyson, Paul H [mailto:PTyson@bellhelicopter.textron.com]
> Sent: Friday, February 26, 2010 9:21 AM
> To: Tyson, Paul H; Harold Lockhart; john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: RE: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> 
> 
> On February 11 we voted it to CD and public review.
> 
> --Paul
> 
> > 
Original Message-----
> > From: Tyson, Paul H
> > Sent: Friday, February 26, 2010 08:16
> > To: Harold Lockhart; john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> > Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> > Subject: RE: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> > 
> >  
> > 
> > > 
Original Message-----
> > > From: Harold Lockhart [mailto:hal.lockhart@oracle.com]
> > > Sent: Thursday, February 25, 2010 15:16
> > > To: john.w.tolbert@boeing.com
> > > Cc: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
> > > Subject: [xacml] Export Control Profile Comments
> > > 
> > > There are a few problems with the Export Control Profile.
> > > 
> > > 1. I checked and we never voted this version to CD. You need to 
> > > create a working draft. It can be just the .doc version.
> > 
> > From
> http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml/201002/msg00003.html:
> > 
> >   John: moves to initiate the 15 day public review
> >   Rich: seconds
> >   Hal: no objections to unanimous consent: approved
> > 
> > --Paul
> > 
> > 
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