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    Posted 08-24-2004 19:10
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    XACML Profile for SAML 2.0, WD 04, 19 Aug 2004
    
    Line numbers from the PDF version
    
    Section 4.1 - Please consider adding <xacml:Target> to the choice.  Here is
    the justification.  A valid use model is for a PDP to retrieve the necessary
    policies at deployment time, rather than upon receiving a request.  The PDP
    is configured with a "topic", whose syntax is an <xacml:Target>.  The
    associated semantics are: the set of requests that the PDP is intended to
    answer.  The topic is used to retrieve and load all the policies that may
    apply to any such request.
    
    Trivial ...
    
    Line 62 - Change "[XACML-SAMLP]" to "[XACML]".
    
    Line 86 - Change "Markup Assertion" to "Assertion Markup".
    
    Line 123 - Some of these definitions end with ">", others do not.
    
    Line 147 - Change "must" to "MUST".
    
    Line 151 - Change "when capitalized" to "when the initial letter is
    capitalized".
    
    Line 159 - Change "is name/value" to "is a name/value".
    
    Lines 196 & 198 - Change "The value" to "The fully-qualified value".  Or,
    maybe, there is a better wording.  The issue is that the literal value of
    the Name XML attribute may depend on a namespace declaration somewhere else
    in the assertion.
    
    Line 252 - Delete leading space.
    
    Lines 270 & 277 - Would it make sense to specify a default value?
    
    Line 290 - Change "element" to "XML attribute".
    
    Line 325 - Change "an" to "a".
    
    Line 332 - Change "[XACML-SAMLP]" to "[XACML]".
    
    Line 356 - Change "is" to "SHALL be".  Change "may" to "MAY".
    
    Line 406 - Delete "in the".
    
    Line 420 - Change <samlp:Request> to <samlp:Response>.
    
    Lines 437, 440, 447 & 454 - Change "VALUE" to "value".
    
    
    
    -----Original Message-----
    From: Anne.Anderson@Sun.com [mailto:Anne.Anderson@Sun.com] 
    Sent: Friday, August 20, 2004 10:28 AM
    To: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org
    Subject: [xacml] Groups - oasis-xacml-profile-dsig-wd-03.pdf uploaded
    
    
    The document oasis-xacml-profile-dsig-wd-03.pdf has been submitted by Anne
    Anderson (Anne.Anderson@Sun.com) to the OASIS eXtensible Access Control
    Markup Language TC document repository.
    
    Document Description:
    XACML XML Digital Signature Profile, Working Draft 03, 19 August 2004.  This
    draft removes all material except for 1) recommending use of signed SAML
    Assertion, Request, Response via XACML Profile for SAML 2.0, and 2) listing
    specific canonicalizations that need to be done for XACML data types.
    
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    acml-profile-dsig-wd-03.pdf
    
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