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    Posted 08-17-2004 16:38
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    Subject: RE: [xacml] Groups - oasis-xacml-profile-multiple-resources-wd-03.pdf uploaded


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    Hi Anne - Here are some comments on the multiple resources profile.  All the
    best.  Tim.
    
    In sections 3.1.3 and 3.2.3 outcomes of "Indeterminate" and "NotApplicable"
    are not currently discussed.
    
    Trivial ...
    
    19 - Include instructions for using the Web form to submit comments (see
    text on the front page of the core spec.).
    52 - unbold "authorization".  Only "decision request" is in the glossary.
    121 and elsewhere - I prefer not to use the section title in the section
    reference (e.g. Section 4.1:"scope").  This is because it isn't always clear
    where the section title ends and the normal text continues.
    132 - Change "is the contents of the <AttributeValue>" to "SHALL be the
    contents of the <AttributeValue> element".
    146 - <children> to <Children> and <descendants> to <Descendants>.  Also,
    how about a shorter title for sections 2.1 and 2.2.  I suggest: "Nodes
    identified by scope" and "Nodes identified by XPath"?
    In Section 2.1, include a note to the effect that "scope" is defined in
    Section 4.
    161 - Eliminate duplicate "be".
    168 & 170 - Change "the Individual Resources are" to "each Individual
    Resource is".
    196 - Change "attribute evaluates" to "attribute is an xpath expression that
    evaluates".
    223 - Correct formatting of <Resource>.
    224 - Change "the mechanisms" to "the other mechanisms".
    243 - Eliminate duplicate "a".
    266 - Eliminate leading space.
    277 - Change "containing" to "contains".
    277 - Eliminate "That node SHALL be the one corresponding to the new request
    context.".  I think this is redundant.  Isn't it?
    295 - Eliminate leading space.
    305 - Eliminate "That node SHALL be the one corresponding to the new request
    context.".  I think this is redundant.  Isn't it?