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Subject: 1.1 Introduction
Greetings,
A couple of comments on 1.1 Introduction in version 17 of the draft:
1.1 Introduction
first paragraph, second sentence reads:
The schema is suitable for office documents, including text documents,
spreadsheets, charts and graphical documents like drawings or
presentations, but is not restricted to these *kind* of documents.
Error: number agreement
Suggest:
... but is not restricted to these kinds of documents.
second paragraph reads:
The schema retains high-level information suitable for editing
document and is friendly to transformations using XSLT or similar
XML-based languages or tools.
Comment: 'The schema retains'?, seems awkward, along with 'suitable
for editing document', which is true but it also supports creation of
documents as well. Note number error with 'document.'
Suggest:
The schema defines suitable XML structures for office documents and is
friendly to transformations using XSLT or similar XML-based tools.
Hope everyone is having a great day!
Patrick
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Patrick Durusau
Director of Research and Development
Society of Biblical Literature
Patrick.Durusau@sbl-site.org
Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model
Topic Maps: Human, not artificial, intelligence at work!
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