Here are the UG comments which I sent to Bob yesterday Judy ***************************************** I see you added a paragraph in to Section 3.33 of the updated UG that addresses the Spec 17 comment (covering the Activation Date case upon Rekey/Renewal). While this section is covering Rekey, etc it actually is more about clarifying the definitions. I wonder if this paragraph about the date issue would fit better into Section 3.17 Using Offset in Re-key and Re-certify Operations That section of course is covering what to do with the offset but it easily could be adapted to cover this non-offset case. I also noticed where you added the CRL checking comment -- I really don't think it fits in section 3.33 Would it be possible to just create a new section covering Revocation Checking? From:
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kmip@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [kmip] Groups - KMIP V1.1 Usage Guide wd08 uploaded Submitter's message hi - this is the updated Usage Guide document with the changes from the public review spreadsheet. regards, Bob -- Mr. Robert Griffin Document Name : KMIP V1.1 Usage Guide wd08 Description KMIP V1.1 Usage Guide wd08 Download Latest Revision Public Download Link Submitter : Mr. Robert Griffin Group : OASIS Key Management Interoperability Protocol (KMIP) TC Folder : Standards Date submitted : 2012-04-04 11:38:59