Hi Toby, I think this is an improvement. The one comment I have is regarding the visual, rather than the text. I would like to see is a bit more contrast between the words such as “Tender”, “Power Product” and the light gray background in the boxes. The white on light gray doesn’t have enough contrast. From: Toby Considine [mailto:
tobyconsidine@gmail.com] On Behalf Of Toby Considine Sent: Monday, June 13, 2011 1:22 PM To:
emix@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [emix] Ws_Calendar in EMIX Figure Perhaps the oldest figure still in EMIX is the one illustrating the use of WS-Calendar in defining Product. - It preexists the Sequence in WS-Calendar - It was around long before either Terms or Availability - It pre-dates the Schedule in EMIX - It sounds closer to Resource then to EMIX - It pre-dates our Transactive States Commenters both liked it or not, thought it might be helpful of it reflected the spec, … Here is a proposed update, relying heavily on Dave Holmberg’s comments, but not entirely. Whatdcha think? If people answer nicely and promptly, I might even consent to not use the Oasis Orange and Purple…. tc “The single biggest problem in communication is the illusion that it has taken place.” – George Bernard Shaw. Toby Considine TC9, Inc TC Chair: oBIX & WS-Calendar TC Editor: EMIX, EnergyInterop U.S. National Inst. of Standards and Tech. Smart Grid Architecture Committee Email:
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