All thanks to Beth Pumo's exceptional editing I submit the final document for your use. We may want to identify other privacy engineering standardization efforts for us to research before the Munich event and or consider publishing this for the morning event as an OASIS document "with whatever the appropriate term is for a working document" Cheers, Gail -- Gail Ann Magnuson Mobile: 1.704.232.5648 Residence: Ponce Inlet, FL Mailing Address 4624 Harbour Village Boulevard #4406 Ponce Inlet, FL 32127 Attachment: Privacy Engineering Research Paper March 12th 2017 final .docx Description: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document