OASIS Transformational Government Framework TC

Title: Reworked Principles Hi All,         As actioned at last weeks TC meeting , I have reworked the Principles section in the Primer to make it more in line with the tone of the rest of the document:-                 <<20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Changes Marked.doc>> For your convenience, here is a copy without the marked up changes                 <<20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Clean.doc>> Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637 Mob : +44 (0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: nig.greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com Web: http://uk.fujitsu.com Unless otherwise stated, this email has been sent from Fujitsu Services Limited, from Fujitsu (FTS) Limited, or from Fujitsu Telecommunications Europe Limited, together Fujitsu . This email is only for the use of its intended recipient. Its contents are subject to a duty of confidence and may be privileged. Fujitsu does not guarantee that this email has not been intercepted and amended or that it is virus-free. Fujitsu Services Limited, registered in England No 96056, registered office 22 Baker Street, London W1U 3BW. Fujitsu (FTS) Limited, registered in England No 03808613, registered office 22 Baker Street, London W1U 3BW. Fujitsu Telecommunications Europe Limited, registered in England No 2548187, registered office Solihull Parkway, Birmingham Business Park, Birmingham, B37 7YU. Attachment: 20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Changes Marked.doc Description: 20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Changes Marked.doc Attachment: 20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Clean.doc Description: 20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Clean.doc

Title: Reworked Principles Thanks Nig.  Happy with your proposed changes and happy also that they can be considered as non-substantive.   John   From: tgf@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tgf@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Greenaway Nigel Sent: 18 October 2011 13:40 To: TGF TC List Subject: [tgf] Reworked Principles   Hi All,         As actioned at last weeks TC meeting, I have reworked the Principles section in the Primer to make it more in line with the tone of the rest of the document:-                 <<20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Changes Marked.doc>> For your convenience, here is a copy without the marked up changes                 <<20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Clean.doc>> Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637 Mob : +44 (0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: nig.greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com Web: http://uk.fujitsu.com Unless otherwise stated, this email has been sent from Fujitsu Services Limited, from Fujitsu (FTS) Limited, or from Fujitsu Telecommunications Europe Limited, together "Fujitsu". This email is only for the use of its intended recipient. Its contents are subject to a duty of confidence and may be privileged. Fujitsu does not guarantee that this email has not been intercepted and amended or that it is virus-free. Fujitsu Services Limited, registered in England No 96056, registered office 22 Baker Street, London W1U 3BW. Fujitsu (FTS) Limited, registered in England No 03808613, registered office 22 Baker Street, London W1U 3BW. Fujitsu Telecommunications Europe Limited, registered in England No 2548187, registered office Solihull Parkway, Birmingham Business Park, Birmingham, B37 7YU.

Title: Reworked Principles Nig   I’m happy with these changes too.  I have to say that  I still have a preference for the active tone of the original rather than the passive one you’ve gone for here.  But this is just a style thing, and I do take the point about this section having a different feel from the rest of the primer in the original.  So if the consensus is to change the tone, then I think your suggestions for doing so are excellent.   Chris Parker Managing Partner, CS Transform Ltd, +44 7951 754 060 From: tgf@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tgf@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Greenaway Nigel Sent: 18 October 2011 13:40 To: TGF TC List Subject: [tgf] Reworked Principles   Hi All,         As actioned at last weeks TC meeting, I have reworked the Principles section in the Primer to make it more in line with the tone of the rest of the document:-                 <<20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Changes Marked.doc>> For your convenience, here is a copy without the marked up changes                 <<20111018 - TGF-Primer-v1.0 Proposed Update to Principles Section (NG) - Clean.doc>> Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637 Mob : +44 (0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: nig.greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com Web: http://uk.fujitsu.com Unless otherwise stated, this email has been sent from Fujitsu Services Limited, from Fujitsu (FTS) Limited, or from Fujitsu Telecommunications Europe Limited, together "Fujitsu". This email is only for the use of its intended recipient. Its contents are subject to a duty of confidence and may be privileged. Fujitsu does not guarantee that this email has not been intercepted and amended or that it is virus-free. Fujitsu Services Limited, registered in England No 96056, registered office 22 Baker Street, London W1U 3BW. Fujitsu (FTS) Limited, registered in England No 03808613, registered office 22 Baker Street, London W1U 3BW. Fujitsu Telecommunications Europe Limited, registered in England No 2548187, registered office Solihull Parkway, Birmingham Business Park, Birmingham, B37 7YU.