To PROMCODE TC, I did one more review of CS02 and found the following problems that need fix. All of them are minor and of editorial nature. Hiroyuki Yoshida (Individual Member) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Document reviewed: OSLC PROMCODE Version 1.0. Part 1: Specification
https://docs.oasis-open.org/oslc-promcode/promcode/v1.0/cs02/promcode-spec.html 1. Introduction 1.2 Goal and Solution [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK] 3. Terminology Project [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK] Project Management [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK] 4. PROMCODE Domain Model Specification 4.1 Domain Model 4.1.1 ScopeItem finer grained ScopeItem entities -> finer-grained ScopeItem entities a coarse grained ScopeItemãentity -> a coarse-grained ScopeItem entity a set of finer grained ScopeItem entities -> a set of finer-grained ScopeItem entities 4.1.2 WorkItem a finer grained activity -> a finer-grained activity A coarse grained WorkItem entity -> A coarse-grained WorkItem entity finer grained WorkItem entities -> finer-grained WorkItem entities a set of fine grained WorkItem entities -> a set of fine-grained WorkItem entities 4.1.3 Artifact finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entities A coarse grained Artifact entity -> A coarse-grained Artifact entity finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entities 4.1.6 ManagedItem Attributes source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a blank character after String) 4.1.8 Report Links correspondsTo: Plan [0 .. 1] the Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity -> a Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity 4.1.11 ManagedItemCollection Attributes source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a blank character after String) 4.1.14 Project Attributes source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a blank character after String) Links unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit[0 .. 1] -> unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit [0 .. 1] (put a blank character after Unit) 4.2.2 Applying Quality Management Table 2 Example of Quality Management Table Line of Code -> Lines of Code Artifact, and Measure -> Artifact, Measure, and Measurement Appendix C. References C.2 Informative references [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK] <a href="
http://www.pmi.org/" ;> -> <a href="
https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/" ;> A Guide to Project Management Body of Knowledge, 5th ed. -> A Guide to the Project Management Body of Knowledge <a href="
http://www.pmi.org/" ;> -> <a href="
https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/" ;>
http://www.pmi.org/Â ; ->
https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------