Comments by line number for EDXL-SitRep Committee Specification Draft 01 / Public Review Draft 01 :
114 - Should line reference Reference ManagementReportingSummary rather than Summaries.
287 and 290 - Graphics identify ResponseResources as the report type. Elsewhere this report type is identified as ResponseResourcesTotals. Recommend updating title here of clarifying in introductory text.
290 - Should Figure 2 “BranchDivision” be “BranchDivisionGroup”. Reference ResourceTotal under (BranchDivisionGroup and Resource) in Table 2.4.
432 - IncidentLocation shows 1..1 in Table 2.3 but Figure 2 lists 0..* for same element.
432 - DisasterInformation shows 0..* in Table 2.3 but Figure 2 lists 0..1 for same element.
434 - ResourceTotal shows 0..* in Table 2.4 but Figure 2 lists 1..* for same element.
436 - Should SummaryCount be changed to 0..11? Reference line 754 Usage statement.
582 - Synonym of "Hey You" in comment does not seem relevant to PreparedBy.
666 - ResourceTotal Element is identified as optional and 0..*, however in Figure 2 it is shown in bold and listed as 1..*.
809 - Last Statement under Definition and items in () under Comments appear to be editorial notes to the authors including references to program and individual names. Recommend removing or clarifying questions as statements.
844 - Clarify EmergencyResponseIssuesUsage as 0.._ after Optional for consistency with approach throughout document.