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  • 1.  For example substantive/editorial

    Posted 09-03-2013 17:54
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    Greetings!

    I am not sure if this is purely editorial or substantive.

    There are numerous examples of the language, "For example" that
    appears in prose in TOSCA.

    The problem is that it isn't separated from what possibly is normative
    text.

    By line numbers (I skipped Section 3):

    71, 487, 490, 493, 504, 814, 978, 1097, 1154, 1230, 1446, 1460, 1662,
    1687, 1742, 1777, 2090, 2174, 2233, 2274, 2353, 2359, 2398, 2463,
    2576, 2583, 2654, 2669, 2676, 2682, 2711, 2894, 2937 and 3016.

    Some thirty-four instances that either should be typographically notes
    (and hence non-normative) or incorporated into the text as normative
    statements.

    Hope everyone is having a great day!

    Patrick
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    Patrick Durusau
    patrick@durusau.net
    Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB)
    Former Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34
    Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
    Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
    Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)

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