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  • 1.  In-publication comments on TOSCA Simple Profile in YAML Version 1.0 csd02

    Posted 01-19-2015 23:11
    In publishing this, I noted the following issues for TC consideration:

    - Appendix H.2 (Terminology) has replaced the usual simple reference to RFC
    2119 with a list of the same references as in H.3 - something got messed up
    there.

    - In Appendix E2, the anchoring of the image is not quite right, so in the
    HTML, the image appears above the statement "The following diagram [...]"

    - "Pinger" shows a number of broken links in the text, most in section
    A4.14, which are rendered as something like:

    http://docs.oasis-open.org/IBM_ADMIN/Documents/IBM/SWG/Standards/SDOs/OASIS/TOSCA/Interop%20SC/YAML/TOSCA-Simple-Profile-YAML-v1.0-wd04-Rev04.docx#DEFN_ELEMENT_CONSTRAINTS
    - another broken link is in section A5.3.1.3, where the namespace is
    listed wrongly (without /ns token)
    - another is in G.1.6.1, a broken link to github
    - in Appendix I (Acknowledgments), four of the email addresses have
    broken links, which render similar to:

    Frank.Leymann@informatik.uni-stuttgart.de">http://docs.oasis-open.org/IBM_ADMIN/Documents/IBM/SWG/Standards/SDOs/OASIS/TOSCA/Interop%20SC/YAML/Frank.Leymann@informatik.uni-stuttgart.de
    these are for: Frank Leymann, Krishna Raman, Nikunj Nemani, and Richard
    Probst

    Best regards,
    Paul
    --
    Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org> - Tel: +1 781-861-1013
    OASIS <https://www.oasis-open.org/> - Advancing open standards for the
    information society
    Document Process Analyst
    <https://www.oasis-open.org/people/staff/paul-knight>



  • 2.  RE: [tosca-comment] In-publication comments on TOSCA Simple Profile in YAML Version 1.0 csd02

    Posted 01-20-2015 05:22
    Hi Paul,

    Thank you for the feedback.

    Best,
    Paul

    From: tosca-comment@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tosca-comment@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Paul Knight
    Sent: Monday, January 19, 2015 4:11 PM
    To: tosca-comment@lists.oasis-open.org
    Subject: [tosca-comment] In-publication comments on TOSCA Simple Profile in YAML Version 1.0 csd02

    In publishing this, I noted the following issues for TC consideration:

    - Appendix H.2 (Terminology) has replaced the usual simple reference to RFC 2119 with a list of the same references as in H.3 - something got messed up there.

    - In Appendix E2, the anchoring of the image is not quite right, so in the HTML, the image appears above the statement "The following diagram [...]"

    * "Pinger" shows a number of broken links in the text, most in section A4.14, which are rendered as something like:
    http://docs.oasis-open.org/IBM_ADMIN/Documents/IBM/SWG/Standards/SDOs/OASIS/TOSCA/Interop%20SC/YAML/TOSCA-Simple-Profile-YAML-v1.0-wd04-Rev04.docx#DEFN_ELEMENT_CONSTRAINTS
    * another broken link is in section A5.3.1.3, where the namespace is listed wrongly (without /ns token)
    * another is in G.1.6.1, a broken link to github
    * in Appendix I (Acknowledgments), four of the email addresses have broken links, which render similar to:
    Frank.Leymann@informatik.uni-stuttgart.de">http://docs.oasis-open.org/IBM_ADMIN/Documents/IBM/SWG/Standards/SDOs/OASIS/TOSCA/Interop%20SC/YAML/Frank.Leymann@informatik.uni-stuttgart.de
    these are for: Frank Leymann, Krishna Raman, Nikunj Nemani, and Richard Probst
    Best regards,
    Paul
    --
    Paul Knight<mailto:paul.knight@oasis-open.org> - Tel: +1 781-861-1013
    OASIS<https://www.oasis-open.org/> - Advancing open standards for the information society
    Document Process Analyst<https://www.oasis-open.org/people/staff/paul-knight>



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