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minor editorial suggestions

  • 1.  minor editorial suggestions

    Posted 03-21-2010 12:43
    Line numbers apply to HT specification

    470 In general sub tasks are human tasks, inheriting all attributes that a human task has, and each behaving
    471 the way that a human task does.
    - Are there tasks other than human tasks?

    524: In a well-defined order using Routing Patterns (see Routing Patterns)
    - Reference to Routing Patterns section needed.

    853 The attachedBy element indicates who added the attachment. It could be a user, not a group or a list of
    854 users or groups.
    - just write "htt:tUser" since "could be a user" implies that it could also be something also.
    - same comment for line 891


    1074 <xsd:simpleType name="tStatus">
    1075 <xsd:restriction base="xsd:string" />
    1076 </xsd:simpleType>
    - tStatus would be better defined as a union of xsd:string and tPredefinedStatus. My assumption is that an enum isn't used here to allow for extensions but the result is that tPredefinedStatus isn't referenced explicitly.

    1177: For routing tasks his attribute MUST be set to....
    - "this", not "his"

    1125: Removing closing "/"

    1409: This optional attribute specifies the way how sub-tasks are instantiated
    - remove "how"

    1528: double period

    1535: (this assignment could have with n potential owners)
    -- remove "with" or rephrase

    1542: I would move this line up above the bullets. I got stuck on 1532-1536 trying to understand the difference between single and all and it would have been much clearer if the notion of separate sub-tasks was stated prior. same comment for Sequential

    1549: missing closing element
    1584: missing closing element

    1628: manual | automatic should be blue

    1675: make bullet

    1764: reference to list of supported functions?

    2290 Start
    - change to lowercase