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  • 1.  Please check Section 3.11.3

    Posted 01-27-2008 21:38
    Hi Folks,
    
    Please check bullets 7 and 8 of Section 3.11.3. They repeat each 
    other and somewhat contradict each other. I'm not going to stop or 
    change it since this is taking longer than I thought it would. I'm 
    keeping a page of notes on things that I think need to be looked over 
    but this is the first one that actually caused me to stop long enough 
    to send out a message about it. I have incorporated everyone else's 
    proofing, so if you find anything, please keep a list and check the 
    next version I post against your list, since it would not be a good 
    idea for me to stop and rewind now that I'm going through it in great 
    detail.
    
    
    Cheers,
    Rex
    -- 
    Rex Brooks
    President, CEO
    Starbourne Communications Design
    GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    Berkeley, CA 94702
    Tel: 510-898-0670
    


  • 2.  Update: Re: [emergency-msg] Please check Section 3.11.3

    Posted 01-28-2008 01:44
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  • 3.  Re: Update: Re: [emergency-msg] Please check Section 3.11.3

    Posted 01-28-2008 13:33
    Hi Folks,
    
    I decided to include EDXL-HAVE in the Notices 
    section, but other than that, and changing the 
    version number to 014, I will upload the version 
    for the TC to review momentarily.
    
    Cheers,
    Rex
    
    At 5:43 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
    >HI folks,
    >
    >I thought I would give you and update and my 
    >Notes--all 4 pages (though 1.25 or so is a paste 
    >from a technical styling source reference). I 
    >will take another last look at it in the morning 
    >before I upload it. I went over the whole thing 
    >with a very fine-tooth comb, back-to-back 
    >looooong days, and I have one version which I 
    >can upload, the redline version of that, and 
    >another version with suggested stylistic 
    >consistency plus the standard edits. We have 
    >some decisions we can choose to make, or defer 
    >since this is, after all, a Public Review draft.
    >
    >Thanks to all!
    >Rex
    >
    >At 1:37 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
    >>Hi Folks,
    >>
    >>Please check bullets 7 and 8 of Section 3.11.3. 
    >>They repeat each other and somewhat contradict 
    >>each other. I'm not going to stop or change it 
    >>since this is taking longer than I thought it 
    >>would. I'm keeping a page of notes on things 
    >>that I think need to be looked over but this is 
    >>the first one that actually caused me to stop 
    >>long enough to send out a message about it. I 
    >>have incorporated everyone else's proofing, so 
    >>if you find anything, please keep a list and 
    >>check the next version I post against your 
    >>list, since it would not be a good idea for me 
    >>to stop and rewind now that I'm going through 
    >>it in great detail.
    >>
    >>
    >>Cheers,
    >>Rex
    >>--
    >>Rex Brooks
    >>President, CEO
    >>Starbourne Communications Design
    >>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    >>Berkeley, CA 94702
    >>Tel: 510-898-0670
    >>
    >>---------------------------------------------------------------------
    >>To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that
    >>generates this mail.  You may a link to this group and all your TCs in OASIS
    >>at:
    >>https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php
    >
    >
    >--
    >Rex Brooks
    >President, CEO
    >Starbourne Communications Design
    >GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    >Berkeley, CA 94702
    >Tel: 510-898-0670
    >
    >Attachment converted: Macintosh 
    >HD:NotesOnFinalEdit-01-28-08.doc (NO%F/«IC») 
    >(0036A808)
    
    
    -- 
    Rex Brooks
    President, CEO
    Starbourne Communications Design
    GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    Berkeley, CA 94702
    Tel: 510-898-0670
    


  • 4.  Re: Update: Re: [emergency-msg] Please check Section 3.11.3

    Posted 01-28-2008 14:34
    I just uploaded the package to the TC Document 
    Repository and our SC repository, too, just to 
    have a complete set of files there as well.
    
    Cheers,
    Rex
    
    At 5:32 AM -0800 1/28/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
    >Hi Folks,
    >
    >I decided to include EDXL-HAVE in the Notices 
    >section, but other than that, and changing the 
    >version number to 014, I will upload the version 
    >for the TC to review momentarily.
    >
    >Cheers,
    >Rex
    >
    >At 5:43 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
    >>HI folks,
    >>
    >>I thought I would give you and update and my 
    >>Notes--all 4 pages (though 1.25 or so is a 
    >>paste from a technical styling source 
    >>reference). I will take another last look at it 
    >>in the morning before I upload it. I went over 
    >>the whole thing with a very fine-tooth comb, 
    >>back-to-back looooong days, and I have one 
    >>version which I can upload, the redline version 
    >>of that, and another version with suggested 
    >>stylistic consistency plus the standard edits. 
    >>We have some decisions we can choose to make, 
    >>or defer since this is, after all, a Public 
    >>Review draft.
    >>
    >>Thanks to all!
    >>Rex
    >>
    >>At 1:37 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
    >>>Hi Folks,
    >>>
    >>>Please check bullets 7 and 8 of Section 
    >>>3.11.3. They repeat each other and somewhat 
    >>>contradict each other. I'm not going to stop 
    >>>or change it since this is taking longer than 
    >>>I thought it would. I'm keeping a page of 
    >>>notes on things that I think need to be looked 
    >>>over but this is the first one that actually 
    >>>caused me to stop long enough to send out a 
    >>>message about it. I have incorporated everyone 
    >>>else's proofing, so if you find anything, 
    >>>please keep a list and check the next version 
    >>>I post against your list, since it would not 
    >>>be a good idea for me to stop and rewind now 
    >>>that I'm going through it in great detail.
    >>>
    >>>
    >>>Cheers,
    >>>Rex
    >>>--
    >>>Rex Brooks
    >>>President, CEO
    >>>Starbourne Communications Design
    >>>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    >>>Berkeley, CA 94702
    >>>Tel: 510-898-0670
    >>>
    >>>---------------------------------------------------------------------
    >>>To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that
    >>>generates this mail.  You may a link to this group and all your TCs in OASIS
    >>>at:
    >>>https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php
    >>
    >>
    >>--
    >>Rex Brooks
    >>President, CEO
    >>Starbourne Communications Design
    >>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    >>Berkeley, CA 94702
    >>Tel: 510-898-0670
    >>
    >>Attachment converted: Macintosh 
    >>HD:NotesOnFinalEdit-01-28-08.doc (NO%F/«IC») 
    >>(0036A808)
    >
    >
    >--
    >Rex Brooks
    >President, CEO
    >Starbourne Communications Design
    >GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    >Berkeley, CA 94702
    >Tel: 510-898-0670
    
    
    -- 
    Rex Brooks
    President, CEO
    Starbourne Communications Design
    GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
    Berkeley, CA 94702
    Tel: 510-898-0670