OASIS DocBook TC2

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  • 1.  Charter Revision

    Posted 01-19-2009 21:07
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  • 2.  RE: [docbook-tc] Charter Revision

    Posted 01-21-2009 16:47 
    Hi Dick,

Looks good. My only comment applies to the following paragraph:

The OASIS DocBook Technical Committee is chartered to develop and
maintain the DocBook family of specifications and to continue to support
its ever growing user base. In particular, the XML DocBook schema, a
simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

The last sentence is not a complete sentence.  Perhaps we could rewrite
it to say something like:
The TC currently supports the XML DocBook schema, a simplified authoring
subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

I'm not sure about limited the sentence to "supports". Maybe the
following is better:
The TC's deliverables currently include the XML DocBook schema, a
simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

Cheers,
Gershon


    
                                                
    
					
                                                    

        
                                                
				
    
                                                
    
                                                    
                                                        
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  • 3.  Re: [docbook-tc] Charter Revision

    Posted 01-21-2009 17:13 
    I like the last sentence that Gershon suggested:

The TC's deliverables currently include the XML DocBook schema, a
simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.

Best regards,

--Scott

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Gershon Joseph (gerjosep) wrote:
> Hi Dick,
>
> Looks good. My only comment applies to the following paragraph:
>
> The OASIS DocBook Technical Committee is chartered to develop and
> maintain the DocBook family of specifications and to continue to support
> its ever growing user base. In particular, the XML DocBook schema, a
> simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.
>
> The last sentence is not a complete sentence.  Perhaps we could rewrite
> it to say something like:
> The TC currently supports the XML DocBook schema, a simplified authoring
> subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.
>
> I'm not sure about limited the sentence to "supports". Maybe the
> following is better:
> The TC's deliverables currently include the XML DocBook schema, a
> simplified authoring subset, and a variant for the publishing industry.
>
> Cheers,
> Gershon
>
> 
    
                                                
    
					
                                                    

        
                                                
				
    
                                                
    
                                                    
                                                        
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