OASIS Topology and Orchestration Specification for Cloud Applications (TOSCA) TC

  • 1.  Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05

    Posted 11-19-2012 20:11
    Members of the TOSCA TC,  Below are some items we noticed while preparing CSD05. We are bringing them to your attention so that you can address them as you like.  1) In Appendix D, the first line "TOSCA-v1.0.xsd:" is hyperlinked to a non-existent address. The relative link is: ../TOSCA-v1.0-csd05/schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd  but it should be: ../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd An easier solution might just be to remove the hyperlink link and refer readers to the "Additional artifacts" section for the link. 2) The d ocument was delivered with change tracking on and comments embedded in the draft. We accepted all changes, turned tracking off and deleted the comments. However, I really want to avoid us touching the TC's authored comment. Please, in future, prepare and approve a version without embedded changes or comments.   Thanks.  -- /chet  ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration  OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-996-2298 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393  Check your work using the Support Request Submission Checklist at  http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/47248/tc-admin-submission-checklist.html   TC Administration information and support is available at http://www.oasis-open.org/resources/tcadmin Follow OASIS on: LinkedIn:     http://linkd.in/OASISopen Twitter:         http://twitter.com/OASISopen Facebook:   http://facebook.com/oasis.open


  • 2.  Re: [tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05

    Posted 11-19-2012 20:16



    Hi Chet,

    Thank you for the feedback. We will incorporate post-CSDPRD 30 day review, as non-material changes.


    Have a great holiday.


    Thanks,
    Paul (from mobile - please excuse typos and brevity)

    Paul Lipton
    CA Technologies
    VP, CA Industry Standards and Open Source Program
    Member, CA Council for Technical Excellence
    Phone (preferred): +1 609 583-9718
    Mobile: +1 267 987-6887
     

    From : Chet Ensign [mailto:chet.ensign@oasis-open.org]

    Sent : Monday, November 19, 2012 02:10 PM
    To : tosca@lists.oasis-open.org <tosca@lists.oasis-open.org>
    Subject : [tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05
     

    Members of the TOSCA TC, 


    Below are some items we noticed while preparing CSD05. We are bringing them to your attention so that you can address them as you like. 



    1) In Appendix D, the first line "TOSCA-v1.0.xsd:" is hyperlinked to a non-existent address. The relative link is:
    ../TOSCA-v1.0-csd05/schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd 


    but it should be:


    ../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd


    An easier solution might just be to remove the hyperlink link and refer readers to the "Additional artifacts" section for the link.


    2) The d ocument was delivered with change tracking on and comments embedded in the draft. We accepted all changes, turned tracking off and deleted the comments.
    However, I really want to avoid us touching the TC's authored comment. Please, in future, prepare and approve a version without embedded changes or comments. 


     Thanks. 


    --

    /chet 
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  • 3.  Re: [tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05

    Posted 11-20-2012 20:44
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    Hi Chet, thanks for your comments. I checked wd-14 and item #1 looks good for me in the word document. Using the 'Alt+F9' shortcut, I get the a {HYPERLINK "../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd"} field (see also attached screenshot). Also, if you follow the "non-redlines" version we uploaded to Kavi, there should be no comments and tracked changes. We started to upload a separate "redlines" version with latest WDs. Maybe with the last upload, I just did a mistake. Let me know if you still observe any issues with our latest WD. (Embedded image moved to file: pic55943.gif) Regards, Thomas --------------------------------------------------------------------- IBM Deutschland Research & Development GmbH Tivoli Service Automation Manager Development, D2705 Schoenaicher Str. 220, D-71032 Boeblingen, Germany Phone: +49-7031-16-1219 Email: thomas.spatzier@de.ibm.com IBM Deutschland Research & Development GmbH Vorsitzender des Aufsichtsrats: Martin Jetter Geschäftsführung: Erich Baier Sitz der Gesellschaft: Böblingen Registergericht: Amtsgericht Stuttgart, HRB 243294 From: Chet Ensign <chet.ensign@oasis-open.org> To: "tosca@lists.oasis-open.org" <tosca@lists.oasis-open.org>, Date: 19.11.2012 21:10 Subject: [tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05 Sent by: <tosca@lists.oasis-open.org> Members of the TOSCA TC, Below are some items we noticed while preparing CSD05. We are bringing them to your attention so that you can address them as you like. 1) In Appendix D, the first line "TOSCA-v1.0.xsd:" is hyperlinked to a non-existent address. The relative link is: ../TOSCA-v1.0-csd05/schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd but it should be: ../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd An easier solution might just be to remove the hyperlink link and refer readers to the "Additional artifacts" section for the link. 2) The document was delivered with change tracking on and comments embedded in the draft. We accepted all changes, turned tracking off and deleted the comments. However, I really want to avoid us touching the TC's authored comment. Please, in future, prepare and approve a version without embedded changes or comments.  Thanks. -- /chet ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-996-2298 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393 Check your work using the Support Request Submission Checklist at http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/47248/tc-admin-submission-checklist.html TC Administration information and support is available at http://www.oasis-open.org/resources/tcadmin Follow OASIS on: LinkedIn:     http://linkd.in/OASISopen Twitter:         http://twitter.com/OASISopen Facebook:   http://facebook.com/oasis.open Attachment: pic55943.gif Description: GIF image


  • 4.  Re: [tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05

    Posted 11-20-2012 21:37
    Thanks Paul. That looks good.  /chet On Tue, Nov 20, 2012 at 3:43 PM, Thomas Spatzier < thomas.spatzier@de.ibm.com > wrote: Hi Chet, thanks for your comments. I checked wd-14 and item #1 looks good for me in the word document. Using the 'Alt+F9' shortcut, I get the a {HYPERLINK "../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd"} field (see also attached screenshot). Also, if you follow the "non-redlines" version we uploaded to Kavi, there should be no comments and tracked changes. We started to upload a separate "redlines" version with latest WDs. Maybe with the last upload, I just did a mistake. Let me know if you still observe any issues with our latest WD. (Embedded image moved to file: pic55943.gif) Regards, Thomas --------------------------------------------------------------------- IBM Deutschland Research & Development GmbH Tivoli Service Automation Manager Development, D2705 Schoenaicher Str. 220, D-71032 Boeblingen, Germany Phone: +49-7031-16-1219 Email: thomas.spatzier@de.ibm.com IBM Deutschland Research & Development GmbH Vorsitzender des Aufsichtsrats: Martin Jetter Geschäftsführung: Erich Baier Sitz der Gesellschaft: Böblingen Registergericht: Amtsgericht Stuttgart, HRB 243294 From:   Chet Ensign < chet.ensign@oasis-open.org > To:     " tosca@lists.oasis-open.org " < tosca@lists.oasis-open.org >, Date:   19.11.2012 21:10 Subject:        [tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05 Sent by:        < tosca@lists.oasis-open.org > Members of the TOSCA TC, Below are some items we noticed while preparing CSD05. We are bringing them to your attention so that you can address them as you like. 1) In Appendix D, the first line "TOSCA-v1.0.xsd:" is hyperlinked to a non-existent address. The relative link is: ../TOSCA-v1.0-csd05/schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd but it should be: ../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd An easier solution might just be to remove the hyperlink link and refer readers to the "Additional artifacts" section for the link. 2) The document was delivered with change tracking on and comments embedded in the draft. We accepted all changes, turned tracking off and deleted the comments. However, I really want to avoid us touching the TC's authored comment. Please, in future, prepare and approve a version without embedded changes or comments.  Thanks. -- /chet ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-996-2298 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393 Check your work using the Support Request Submission Checklist at http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/47248/tc-admin-submission-checklist.html TC Administration information and support is available at http://www.oasis-open.org/resources/tcadmin Follow OASIS on: LinkedIn:     http://linkd.in/OASISopen Twitter:         http://twitter.com/OASISopen Facebook:   http://facebook.com/oasis.open --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: tosca-unsubscribe@lists.oasis-open.org For additional commands, e-mail: tosca-help@lists.oasis-open.org -- /chet  ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration  OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-996-2298 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393  Check your work using the Support Request Submission Checklist at  http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/47248/tc-admin-submission-checklist.html   TC Administration information and support is available at http://www.oasis-open.org/resources/tcadmin Follow OASIS on: LinkedIn:     http://linkd.in/OASISopen Twitter:         http://twitter.com/OASISopen Facebook:   http://facebook.com/oasis.open