Norm, I note that I completed the changes inline below with --Done except for the second Line 369 which I believe was just a transposition for Line 396 where I made the change. Rather than make a new working draft, I replaced the existing version with a new revision without a new filename. I will continue this for any further changes. Cheers, Rex On 10/8/2021 6:29 PM, Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) wrote: Rex In wd04 Line 352 – the word ”an” should be “the” --Done Line 353 – should be… (i.e. a “wind” event leading to a “wind” alert) --Done Line 367 – missing the word “all”, should be…all associated to a “tropical storm” event. --Done Line 368 – two spaces at the end of the line --Done Line 369 – two spaces after… However --Done Line 369 – should be… “smoke” event (took a bit of looking, but I think this should be Line 396) --Done Line 403 – missing comma after the word “both” --Done Line 404 – The word Practices should start a new paragraph --Done An extra entry in Appendix B... OET-144 Heavy Rain --Done and the code was automatically corrected - Not sure how that got inserted in there. Its not even alphabetical so something seems wrong. Norm Paulsen Data Architecture and Standards Architecture des données et des normes Forecast Systems Integration & Inno vation Intégration et innovation du système de prévisions Meteorological Service of Canada Service météorologique du Canada ECCC 4905 Dufferin St. Toronto, Ontario M3H 5T4 Tel: 416 739-4190 Email:
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