Edits proposed on updates
introduced in pdf WD15:
L278 (section 1.3) the 1st
sentence sounds weird:
"..is the
specification of the MSH and its associated processing rules as a Web
Service." do we mean
"and its associated processing rules using Web Service standards"?
L281: "...; propose to remove
the sentence with "EdNotes" starting "For example....coherent
framework" as what it conveys
is mostly repeated/detailed
afterward, and developed L291 to L302.
Instead:
- L280 replace "complete
eBusiness" by "complete and coherent eBusiness"
- add the following sentence just
before L285:
"In order to achieve this,
message security and reliability requirements are met through the
use of other Web Services
standards and their implementations. The message SOAP body has been...."
L533: replace "SOAP
Request-response MEP" with "SOAP Request-response MEP and SOAP
Response MEP"
L535: replace: "is an
important aspect when defining ebMS MEPs." by " is yet to be
determined".
L626: replace
"(@mpf)" with "(eb:PullRequest/@mpf attribute)
L793: replace "... is
able to prioritize teh messages it received" with:
"... is able to
prioritize the reception of its messages."
L1219: replace "cases
(a), (c) or (d)" with "cases (1), (3) or (4)"
L1223: replace (a) and (c)
with (1) and (3)
L1233: replace "child
elements" with "children elements" to be conssitent with
rest of doc. Same for L1322.
L1375: replace
"Inconsistent" with "ValueInconsistent"
L1376: replace
"NotRecognized" with "ValueNotRecognized"
L2473: concatenate L2474
right after. (remove the NL)
L2485: replace "such as
an Acknowledgement" with "such as a missing Acknowledgement"
L2489: replace :
"(false delivery success)" with "(false delivery)"
L2723: to dispatch these
"EdNotes" text items to the right place. Should the 1st and 3rd
bullet
(SOAP Fault) be moved into
first bullet of 6.6? Second bullet seems to go in 10.2.1.