OASIS ebXML Messaging Services TC

[ebxml-msg] renumbered and revised editorial comments on v1.08

  • 1.  [ebxml-msg] renumbered and revised editorial comments on v1.08

    Posted 11-15-2001 08:31
    line 21 - fix URI, incorrectly references ebxml.org/specs/ location
    
    section 1
    line 226- s/for exchanging the electronic/for exchanging electronic/
    line 229- s/ebXML-compliant//
    
    section 1.1.1
    line 243- s/Core Components/Core Functionality/ or possibly /Core
    Messaging Features/ the concern is
         that "Core Components" will somehow be associated with ebXML's Core
    Components
    line 228 - s/ebXML SOAP Header and Body,/ebXML SOAP Header and Body
    extensions,/
    
    section 1.1.4
    
    line 301- s/transport protocols/communication protocols/
    
    section 1.3.2
    line 490- s/For example the following fragment:/The following fragment
    is an example of the MIME headers for the
         multipart/related Message Package/
    line 497- need to call this out more prominently
    
    section 1.3.3.2
    line 518- strike "For example:" and the ensuing example on line 485
    
    section 1.3.4
    line 541- s/MUST/SHOULD/ as this is not required
    line 545- s/by/in/
    
    secion 1.3.6
    line 576- s/SOAP/SOAPATTACH/
    
    section 2.2.2
    line 632- s/ebXML TR&P team/OASIS ebXML Messaging TC/
    
    section 2.2.5
    line 698- s/Service/Module/
    
    section 2.2.6
    line 706-712- this is not enforcable since mU applies only to direct
    child descendants of the
         SOAP-Env:Header element (SOAP header blocks)
    
    	the TC agreed to remove this paragraph.
    
    
    section 2.2.7
    line 714- s/listed above/defined in this specification/
    
    section 3.1.1
    line 782- s/organisation/organization/
    line 789- s/SHALL follow/SHALL immediately follow/
    
    section 3.1.1.2 example
    line 811/815- if we're recommending that Role be a URI, then the
    examples should reflect this
         s,Buyer,http://rosettanet.org/roles/buyer,
         s,Seller,http://rosettanet.org/roles/seller,
    
    section 3.1.3
    line 839 - ConversationId need not necesarily be unique "within the From
    and To party pair". Rather, it needs to be unique within the context of
    the specified CPAId.
    
    section 3.1.4
    line 862- I thought that we changed the URIs for the MSH services to be
    URNs scoped to the
         OASIS URN namespace.
    
    section 3.1.6
    line 879 - and attributes? There are no attributes on this element.
    
    section 3.1.6.4
    line 907- s/parameter/element
    
    section 3.2
    line 970- s/data/payload data/
    
    section 3.2.1
    line 983 - if the intent is to allow for zero or more Schema elements,
    then this should be made explicit. Same holds for Description I believe.
    
    section 3.2.3
    line 1032 - strike this sentence
    
    section 4.1.1
    line 1070/1071- strike sentence. refers to THIS section!
    
    section 4.1.4.6
    line 1225 s/between two ebXML/between two adjacent ebXML/
    
    section 7.3.1.2 signed attribute
    line 1548/9 - s/Delivery Receipt/Acknowledgment/
    
    section 10.1.2 sequence number
    line 2141 - missing example!
    
    section 11.2.1
    line 2315 - s/nextMSH/toPartyMSH/
    
    section 11.2.2
    line 2332 - s/nextMSH/toPartyMSH/
    
    
    
    
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