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RE: [pbd-se] Revised Draft Comments on NISTIR 8062 - Comments Needed by July 10

  • 1.  RE: [pbd-se] Revised Draft Comments on NISTIR 8062 - Comments Needed by July 10

    Posted 07-07-2015 14:54
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    And now with the file….
     
    Best regards
     


    From: Notario McDonnell, Nicolas

    Sent: Tuesday, July 07, 2015 3:41 PM
    To: 'Gail Magnuson'; John Sabo
    Cc: pmrm@lists.oasis-open.org; pbd-se@lists.oasis-open.org
    Subject: RE: [pbd-se] Revised Draft Comments on NISTIR 8062 - Comments Needed by July 10


     
    Dear John
     
    Many thanks for your integration. I’ve included very few modifications.
     
    Best regards
     
    From:
    pbd-se@lists.oasis-open.org [ mailto:pbd-se@lists.oasis-open.org ]
    On Behalf Of Gail Magnuson
    Sent: Monday, July 06, 2015 7:11 PM
    To: John Sabo
    Cc: pmrm@lists.oasis-open.org ;
    pbd-se@lists.oasis-open.org
    Subject: Re: [pbd-se] Revised Draft Comments on NISTIR 8062 - Comments Needed by July 10
     

    John,

     


    Great job in integrating all of our comments!


     


    I will have my edits/comments back to you tomorrow.


     


    Best, Gail



     

    On Mon, Jul 6, 2015 at 7:36 AM, John Sabo < john.annapolis@comcast.net > wrote:
    TC Members:

    Attached is the updated revision of comments on the NISTIR 8062 that we have been discussing.  I tried to integrate comments as best I could, but that is always challenging so I ask the major contributors (Gail Magnuson, Mike Davis, Nico Notario, Antonio Kung)
    to review carefully to ensure I captured your main issues.  There is a certain amount of repetitiveness and overlap, but I don't have the cycles to do another major edit for readability.

    Our response to the NISTIR is due by July 13,  so I will need TC member comments on this draft by Friday, July 10 so they can be formatted and transmitted by the due date.

    Dawn,  as chair of the PbD-SE TC, I will need your approval to include your TC in our submission.

    Best regards,

    John

    John Sabo, CISSP
    Chair, PMRM TC









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