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Subject: 2.3.1 Text Document Content Model




From: Patrick Durusau <Patrick.Durusau@sbl-site.org>
To: office <office@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date: Fri, 05 Nov 2004 07:54:34 -0500






Greetings,

The second sentence of the first paragraph reads:

To allow office applications to implement functionality that usually is 
available in spreadsheets also for text documents, it may also contain 
some elements that implement enhanced table features.

Comment: True but why say 'some elements'? Simpler to simply say 'it may 
also contain elements that...'

This is common to a number of places so I won't be repeating this 
suggestion everytime I encounter the issue. (search for 'may contain 
some elements')

Comment: Suggest losing the 'also' in 'also for' as well. This occurs 
elsewhere so this is a general comment.

Suggest:

To allow office applications to implement functionality that usually is 
available in spreadsheets for text documents, it may also contain 
elements that implement enhanced table features.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

-- 
Patrick Durusau
Director of Research and Development
Society of Biblical Literature
Patrick.Durusau@sbl-site.org
Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model

Topic Maps: Human, not artificial, intelligence at work!








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Re: [office] 2.3.1 Text Document Content Model
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