"... a routing function
that maps messages based on header content to the next
MSH (as
defined in section ...), either to a next MSH destination or to a
pull channel . "
§2.3.3: As mentioned some time ago I think the Bridged Domains topology
as currently described is not supported by this profile as it allows for
different protocols in de domains. The profile however requires end-to-end ebMS
messaging. Removing the different protocol usage from the bridge domains
description leaves nothing more than another instance of the interconnected hubs
topology. I cant create a useful description, maybe one of you can? If not, I
would prefer to remove this topology from the document.
§2.3.4: Should this
section not precede 2.3.3 ?
<JD>
how about removing 2.3.3 and expanding a bit on 2.3.2 by mentioning the "bridged
domains" variant, where the regional Hub is serving as a gateway to an entire
subnetwork that can in turn involve other Intermediaries? The rationale is that
such gateways would isolate their subnet, each subnet being only reachable
via the gateway.
L417-421: Remove last
sentence from paragraph as it not really related to the transparency
feature.
L456-457: Change ... including Reliable Messaging ... signed. to
... including WS-ReliableMessaging and WS-Addressing header elements where used
within WS-ReliableMessaging to be signed.
<JD>
still unclear wording...how about replacing with "...which specifies how to
combine reliable messaging and security"
L460: Insert see section 2.6.2
on forwarding models after ... subsequent forwarding
L464: Change
P-Modes to P-Mode features
L472-475: Text unclear, remove?
<JD>
agree.
L540-541: Last sentence is
incomplete.
<JD>
how about replacing with: "However
they will be given some composed names such as
"First-and-Last-Push".
L665: Change the name to Request-push-last-sync and
Reply-sync-last-pull
L851: Remove missing reference or refer to section on
sub-channels and/or core spec on MPC.
L862: Remove empty bullit
L871:
Here it is stated that routing of PullRequests can be done on MPC alone. Its
unclear to me which routing is meant here, because in most situation I expect
PullRequests not to be routed but directly processed by the Intermediary. If the
request is routed I assume it is routed to the Sending endpoint. And in such
situation I would expect that more information than only the MPC is needed for
routing.
<JD>
see 2.5.2.2, case (3), for routing of PullRequest. If more info is needed for
routing, then a ref parameter is added (like for other signals). But there is
nothing else "natively" available other than MPC, in
PullRequest.
L873: Reference to message
(a) and (b) should be reference to message 1 and 2
L883-888: Several element
names not formatted as such
L893-894: See earlier remark on which message is
routed here, the PullRequest or an User Message waiting at the intermediairy to
be pulled?
On 20/10/2009 14:18, "
ian.c.jones@bt.com" <
ian.c.jones@bt.com>
wrote: