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Subject: RE: [office] "you can"




From: "Tom Magliery" <tom.magliery@blastradius.com>
To: "Michael Brauer" <Michael.Brauer@Sun.COM>
Date: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 18:12:23 -0800






hello all,

i have rewritten all occurrences *except one* of the words "you" and
"your" from chapters 1 through 10 of the spec (working from michael's
newer draft from yesterday).  this includes not only "you can" but also
a few scattered others.  i'll send the revised document straight to
michael because i don't know if i can upload a draft myself.

the one occurrence i did not change -- but we should -- is at the bottom
of page 370.  i think my brain is too addled this late in the day to
figure out a reasonable rewording of this paragraph.  maybe i'll be able
to think more clearly later, or maybe someone else can beat me to it.

i will probably not be in the office tomorrow, but i can pick up again
wherever things are left off on friday.

mag



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