Dear VEL TC members,
I ve attached my comments on the complete VEL draft.
As agreed, I will present the comments during the next telco.
Best,
Damir
Damir Nesic
PhD student/MSc projects coordinator
KTH Royal Institute of Technology
School of Industrial Engineering and Management
Machine Design/Mechatronics Division
BrinellvÃgen 83, SE-100 44 Stockholm, Sweden
Phone: +46-8-790 63 03, Mobile: +46-73-765 20 74
damirn@kth.se ,
www.kth.se From: Damir Nesic
Sent: den 3 mars 2019 15:17
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Subject: Comments on the draft document
Dear VEL TC memebers,
I ve attached my comments on the first 20 pages of the draft document. I ve also made some minor grammatical corrections.
Hopefully the comments will contribute to a good discussion tomorrow.
Best,
Damir
Damir Nesic
PhD student/MSc projects coordinator
KTH Royal Institute of Technology
School of Industrial Engineering and Management
Machine Design/Mechatronics Division
BrinellvÃgen 83, SE-100 44 Stockholm, Sweden
Phone: +46-8-790 63 03, Mobile: +46-73-765 20 74
damirn@kth.se ,
www.kth.se Attachment: VEL-v1.0-wd01.docx Description: VEL-v1.0-wd01.docx