Thanks Norm, That blank linespace has been taken care of, Acknowledgments changed and I added the revision history, so I'll upload wd04 momentarily. In case anyone needs to know I'll be out on chores and errands in about an hour or so, and won't be available till late afternoon Pacific Time. Thanks to All, Rex On 10/8/2021 11:24 AM, Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) wrote: 1) Line 252 appears to me as an extra blank line between numbered bullets 10 and 11 in section 2.7 when all the other numbered bullets in this section do not have this blank line. 2) I would have to get the diagram for “Contagious Disease” created. The student, that has all that in her work folders, is back in on Tuesday. So if we decide on a title, she’ll be able to get that done first thing Tuesday (to keep the diagram fonts/sizes/colours etc.. consistent with all other diagrams). I’m ok with Contagious Disease. Norm From: Rex Brooks <
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Norm.Paulsen@ec.gc.ca> ;
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elysajones@yahoo.com> Subject: Last minute changes Re: [emergency-cap] Groups - etl-v1.0-cn01-wd03.docx uploaded Hi All, There was a previously missed item that I couldn't find: Line 252. I noted the changes I found immediate ly below my signature. I had to search around the line numbers since they change between versions. I think we (Norm) need to come up with a solution for Section 3.4 – Spectrum = Infectious Disease / Action… seems like it should be retitled if we voted down Infectious Disease. we can also use disease , disease outbreak and contagious disease . I vote for contagious disease . I want to upload this asap, so if I don't hear back on this in an hour or so, I'll upload with the note that we have a couple of changes we need to decide on. Please get back to me soon since we're going for a ballot over the weekend. We can still change to Monday if we absolutely must . Cheers, Rex There are a few things, like extra spaces in text, that are in all copies and were just spotted now… Line 44 'if' to 'of' Line 46 Extra space before Consumers.. Line 252 ? Line 564 Extra space between cases and the Line 720 Extra space between were and designed On 10/7/2021 8:51 PM, Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) wrote: Using the line numbers found in the wd03 document, here’s the list… I can call you and show you these with a video call earlier before the 11 am meeting. I will log in at 9 am and check if and when you’d like to do that. We can use my Zoom. Many of these you will be able to see right away from the listing below, but the yellow stuff will just be easier to show you. Line 156 - extra blank Line 189 – capital letter Line 288 – extra period Line 302 - extra ‘s’ on the word ‘distribution’ Line 312 - the snippet “for this element” is present in WD03, but had been removed in the re-write. Line 330 – missing comma Line 338 – “as broad or narrow” should be “is broad or narrow” Lines 343-352 – (section 3) 4 word tweaks not incorporated Line 354-407 – (section 3.1) 9 word tweaks and corrections not incorporated Line 417 – missing the word “anticipated” Line 468 – sentence ends with 4 periods Line 569 - capital letter Line 574 - capital letter There are a few things, like extra spaces in text, that are in all copies and were just spotted now… Line 44 'if' to 'of' Line 46 Extra space before Consumers.. Line 252 ? Line 564 Extra space between cases and the Line 720 Extra space between were and designed Images Section 3.2 - Spectrum = Fire / Time, not copied over from my draft to yours Section 3.3 – Spectrum = Fire / Urgency, not replaced from my draft to yours with… Spectrum Fire / Impact Section 3.4 – Spectrum = Infectious Disease / Action… seems like it should be retitled if we voted down Infectious Disease. OET-200 in appendix B, should be “transport issue” Appendix C missing this latest revision Norm From: Rex Brooks <
rexb@starbourne.com> Sent: October 7, 2021 3:15 PM To: Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) <
Norm.Paulsen@ec.gc.ca> Cc: Jacob Westfall <
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elysajones@yahoo.com> Subject: Re: [emergency-cap] Groups - etl-v1.0-cn01-wd03.docx uploaded Hi Norm, I hope it's not endless, but... Please send them over tonight. It's unlikely I'll get to them since I've turned into a bit more of a sundowner in the last few years, and I'd rather not do these last changes tonight. However, if I have an idea of how many changes other than a revised Acknowledgements, I can adjust my schedule to accommodate this. I've always been a morning person and my performance is better in those hours... So I'd rather be safe than sorry. We may want to have a special SC meeting to get its approval of these changes so that we have it properly minuted. I would not be in favor of a with pending changes tacked onto the approval tomorrow. A special meeting could be Monday anytime for me or Tuesday before the TC meeting. Cheers, Rex On 10/7/2021 11:17 AM, Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) wrote: Rex.. I did a comparison and yes there are several misses to report…. For example… 1. Section 2, line 5, extra blank 2. Section 2, line 6, extra space and extra period. 3. Section 2.9, line 11, extra ‘s’ on the word ‘distribution’ 4. Section 2.10, line 8, the snippet “for this element” is present in WD03, but had been removed in the re-write. 5. Etc… There are a number of these. I can easily show them tomorrow, or do you want them fully listed like the above and sent over tonight. I could do that after 10pm tonight. Norm From:
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emergency-cap@lists.oasis-open.org> On Behalf Of Rex Brooks Sent: October 6, 2021 4:17 PM To:
emergency-cap@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [emergency-cap] Groups - etl-v1.0-cn01-wd03.docx uploaded Submitter's message This is a new Working Draft wd03. I've done my best, but we know there's always something a mere human will miss. Let's gather up any edits, changes and corrections so that with the addition of revised Acknowledgements, I can put together one more improved working draft for approval. It would be good if we could come close to wrapping up those last changes Friday 8 October 2021 for approval at next Tuesday's EMTC Meeting 12 October 2021 for the CAP Workshop and IAEM. Rex -- Rex Brooks Document Name : etl-v1.0-cn01-wd03.docx No description provided. Download Latest Revision Public Download Link Submitter : Rex Brooks Group : EM CAP SC Folder : Committee Notes Date submitted : 2021-10-06 13:17:13 Virus-free.
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