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Subject: Re: [emergency] NOAA Letter and meeting today a 3:00 EDT
Thanks Elysa,
I am available today for the call.
I think the first paragraph is a bit disjointed.
I think the second sentence should not be one
long sentence, but two shorter ones. Also the
last sentence does not seem to belong with the
paragraph's overall thought and sounds like
something I would expect the addressee (along
with whomever else we are addressing by
implication) to know. I think it should be a
separate short paragraph. I suggest:
I am writing on behalf of the Emergency
Management Technical Committee (EMTC) of the
Organization for the Advancement of Structured
Information Standards (OASIS). We would like to
commend your staff for utilizing the Common
Alerting Protocol (CAP) as the basis for the
HazCollect system, an NWS initiative in
partnership with the Federal Emergency Management
Agency. We also want to address an anticipated
far reaching problem with the system in its
current form.
As you may know, HazCollect enables federal,
state and local emergency managers to
automatically forward Non-Weather Emergency
Messages into the NOAA All-Hazard Radio network
and other NOAA public dissemination systems.
I would also break the current second paragraph
into at least two paragraphs, breaking with the
sentence that starts: "Deviation...."
Regards,
Rex
At 10:46 AM -0500 6/16/06, Elysa Jones wrote:
>TC Members,
>
>Patti and I have worked on the NOAA letter which
>is attached. Please review as soon as possible.
>I would like to have a telecon to accept any
>final comments and approve the letter with a
>quorum this afternoon if possible. Please try
>to be available for a very short call at
>3:00EDT. Reply to the list if can make this.
>Thank you, Elysa
>
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