OpenC2 Technical Committee, Suggest the following twenty five administrative changes to the "Open Command and Control (OpenC2) Profile for Stateless Packet Filtering Version 1.0" Please note that the page and line numbers correspond to the pdf version. Respectfully Submitted, Joe Brule Page(s)/ [Line Number(s)]: 41/ [1] Suggested Change: Insert 'Annex D: Acronyms'. then rename current Annex D and E Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 1/ [8] Suggested Change: change 'transport' to 'transfer' Justification: OpenC2 is payload for application layer, therefore more accurate to define external dependencies at layer 7. Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 7/[19] Suggested Change: Add non normative references by Willett and Herring Justification: Need a reference for the IACD model Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 9/[19-20] Suggested Change: Modify to read " and not intended to preclude other means to achieve information assurance, e.g. the use of an... " Justification: Clarity Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 9/[22-53] Suggested Change: remove references to the subcommittees in the figure Justification: The section addresses scope of the different specifications, the organization of the TC is not relevant in that context Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 11/ [11 and 12] Suggested Change: do not hyphenate stateless packet filtering Justification: consistency Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 11/ [24] Suggested Change: replace ACTUATOR-ARGS and COMMAND-ARGS with ARGUMENTS Justification: Accuracy and consistency with other specifications Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 11/[41] Suggested Change: delete repeated 'may' Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 11/[46] Suggested Change: hyphenate nonnormative Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 11/[51-53] Suggested Change: Section Three presents criteria that define conformance. Conformance assures that products, instances and/or integration are interoperable. Justification: clarity Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 11/[54, 55] Suggested Change: There are five annexes, but only want to highlight the three that facilitate developers. Need to reword. Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 13/ [17] Suggested Change: change 'does not' to 'SHALL NOT' Justification: Need to communicate the fact that 'homegrown' actions are not allowed Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 13/[20] Suggested Change: change target-specifiers' to uppercase Justification: consistency with conventions in the other specs Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 13/[29] Suggested Change: make 'section 2.3' a live link and will check throughout the document for links Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 14/[29] Suggested Change: the reference to 'section 2.2.6 of Version 1.0....' needs to be updated Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 16/[19] Suggested Change: change the second bullet to read 'the value MUST map to exactly one deny <target> or allow <target> for a given instance of an SLPF' Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 16/[21] Suggested Change: change to 'Entities that receive but do not support directionality ...' Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 18/[10] Suggested Change: change identify to identifies and change present to presents Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 20/[48] Suggested Change: change 'query openc2' to 'query features' and perform a global search to check for other locations Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 21/[38] Suggested Change: delete space in restart/ reboot and will do a global find replace '/ ' with '/' Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 23/[40-45] Suggested Change: formatting was lost in the translation to pdf Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 24/[12] Suggested Change: delete 'the' in 'Profile for basic Stateless...' Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): All conformance clauses Suggested Change: formatting was lost in the translation to pdf. Justification: Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 25/[12 and 34] Suggested Change: 'which identify underlying protocols such that an authenticated ...' (delete word transfer) Justification: Transfer specs might identify more than the transfer layer itself Resolution: Page(s)/ Line Number(s): 31/[47] Suggested Change: 'Optional status text is ignored by the openc2 producer, but may be added to' Justification: Highlights that status text is for logging/ debug, but not appropriate for purposes of command and control Resolution: