Bill and all, Thanks for the consideration of the comments I made in the previous version. I had hoped to get to this, but have had a chaotic schedule and some family concerns that kept me out of the office and tied up the last two weeks. I’m good with many of the edits. I have made some additional suggestions for the edits in my attached document. Regards, Joshua From:
emix@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:
emix@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of William Cox Sent: Wednesday, June 13, 2012 4:58 PM To: EMIX TC Subject: [emix] Please re-review the two notes for Thursday, June 14 Links are in previous emails. Thanks! bill cox -- William Cox Email:
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