Dear members,
I just finished my review of the executíve briefing v2 doc at:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xn8Fo1lgZFU5aKnS0x95enqhH-otd3os2ojtEDD_yCA/I provided "suggested edits" where I was mostly sure,
the other members should simply compare the alternatives and
choose.
Else, I provided comments, including rationale, and the
usual caveat, that I am a German and maybe one should
not let me write in English ...
As a German, I usually do not say such things but:
This looks good already, thank you for providing.
Maybe, we should just ship it!
Cheers,
Stefan.