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v3.2 WD07 review comments related to Public Comments Item 1 : GCM-CCMWrapIVnonceUpdate_wd8

  • 1.  v3.2 WD07 review comments related to Public Comments Item 1 : GCM-CCMWrapIVnonceUpdate_wd8

    Posted 12-10-2024 09:56

    Hi,

    here are my review comments for this item.

    I have a small comment that applies to both section 5.18.6 C_WrapKeyAuthenticated and 5.18.7 C_UnwrapKeyAuthenticated.  Both sections make the same statement "Of course, tokens vary in which types of keys can actually be wrapped with which mechanisms."  I would suggest that the two sections make independent statements "can actually be wrapped" and "can actually be unwrapped" respectively.  Or both sections can make the same statement "Of course, tokens vary in which types of keys can actually be wrapped and unwrapped with which mechanisms."  Or some similar type of change.

    This proposal introduced CK_GCM_WRAP_PARAMS and CK_CCM_WRAP_PARAMS.  CK_GCM_WRAP_PARAMS appears to be in the updated header files already, however CK_CCM_WRAP_PARAMS is still missing from the header files.

    Everything else looks good.

    Thanks



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    Darren Johnson
    THALES
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  • 2.  RE: v3.2 WD07 review comments related to Public Comments Item 1 : GCM-CCMWrapIVnonceUpdate_wd8

    Posted 01-29-2025 16:44

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    Hi everyone,

    this is related to public comments item #1 which was originally handled by Hamish.

     

    I have verified that the comments I raised below have been address in WD08 and in the current header files.

     

    Thanks

    Darren