Submitter's message I am rolling back the minor changes published earlier with the arrival of a significant number of additional comments. This document now shows all comments from PR03 and no changes yet.
Sometimes the comments agree on a single point, sometimes they disagree, sometimes they create a tension that illustrates an area upstream in the document with an inadequate explanation--so I am sharing them raw and in the document
I will recreate the relatively minor edits that are obvious or simple in WD24
-- Toby Considine
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Toby Considine
Systems Engineer
University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
919-619-2104
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