Hi Jane.
I reviewed the pdf of the presentation. The only word that I would change (and I am ok with the way it is) is on the 3rd slide Why Data Provenance Matters. I would change the first bullet from "trusted" to "consistent" . Trusted has many meaning while consistent helps people understand that it is transferable from one environment to another.
Once we get this, may I get the powerpoint? I have to get the presentation for OSI done this week.
Thanks. Lisa
Lisa Bobbitt (lbobbitt)
Principal Engineer, Privacy
Cisco